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A little girl hugged her father in the eerie coffin. They had been at the wake for hours, and she hadn’t left her side for even a second.

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The parlor of the Montrose family home had never held so much silence. Where laughter and the scent of rosemary bread usually lingered, there was now only the heavy stillness of mourning. The coffin rested in the center of the room, surrounded by roses that had already begun to bow under the heat of dozens of candles. Relatives whispered in hushed tones, neighbors murmured condolences, children darted about without comprehension, and the adults carried the weight of grief with weary hands.

Yet the person who drew every eye was not the man in the coffin, Alistair Montrose, gone too soon at forty-two. It was his daughter, eight-year-old Elodie.

She had not moved since they had returned from the funeral home. Perched on a wooden chair pulled close to the casket, she stood on tiptoe, her small palms pressed against the polished oak. In her pale blue dress, hair ribbons crooked from the day’s rush, and scuffed black shoes, she gazed at her father’s face with unblinking devotion.

“Elodie, sweetheart, come sit with me for a while,” her mother pleaded softly, touching her shoulder. “You need to eat something.”

The child shook her head, her eyes never leaving the still figure inside.

“I’ll stay here,” she whispered.

Her grandmother, seated in the corner with swollen eyes and trembling fingers, raised her voice gently. “Let her be, Caroline. We all say goodbye in our own way.”

The hours crept by. Cups of coffee were poured and emptied, plates of bread and cheese were passed between weary hands, stories of Alistair’s easy laughter and kind nature floated through the room. Still, Elodie remained. She refused food, refused a seat, asking only for the chair that allowed her to be close enough to touch the coffin without stretching.

“She doesn’t understand,” muttered an aunt.
“She’s in shock,” another whispered.
A neighbor lowered her voice further. “No… she’s waiting for something.”

The comment settled uneasily in the room.

By evening, the glow of candlelight turned the parlor amber. Unease spread like smoke, with more glances drifting toward the child than toward the coffin. She leaned against the polished wood, her chin resting there as if expecting her father to stir at any moment.

“I want to stay with him,” Elodie whispered again when her mother tried to coax her to bed.

Her grandmother draped a blanket around her small shoulders, and the family let her remain.

The night dragged on. Cigarettes glowed faintly on the porch as uncles whispered under the stars. In the kitchen, cousins nursed cups of bitter coffee, reheated one too many times. Inside, the grandmother’s knitting needles clicked faintly though her hands shook with every stitch.

Close to midnight, when weariness had softened the edges of grief, Elodie moved. Slowly, carefully, she climbed from the chair, rested one knee on the coffin’s edge, and hoisted herself inside. At first, no one noticed.

It was an aunt’s shrill cry that shattered the quiet. “She’s in there! She climbed in with him!”

The room erupted. Chairs scraped, voices rose in panic. But when they rushed forward, they froze.

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